Ok 4 ur second
Well i can see u got some potential u just need 2 explore it but there r some things that could could work on like keepin it on beat i used 2 have dat prob a while ago itz ok song but u need some time 2 get good at makin beatz i like did intro started good dough if it was longa then i could give u a more detailin review bout how u could make dis betta.. ay yo check out some of my stuff when u got a chance be ezy
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